I would advise future students to READ. Reading seems to have gone by the way side. When you read a book, a magazine, or even another students essay, pay attention to how the writer has used the space available. Take note on the dialogue used for the particular writing, is it appropriate, does it grab your attention?
Some of the toughest aspects of English 101, was the development of an entire essay and making all of the thoughts connect. It is important to stop and read the literature as it is being developed. A writer can become lost in a particular thought, but forget what the literature was about originally. If your reading something that has importance to your writing, take notes in the margin (if applicable). These quick reference notes will allow you to arrange them accordingly and elaborate on the thought later.
The best tip I can give, is to simply re-read your work. Read it for clarity. A good way to do this is to read the literature starting from the last sentence to the first. This allows you to determine the structure of each sentence without your brain inadvertently filling in the gaps.



